Personal+Narrative+Review+II

You did such an excellent job analyzing the writing pieces last week, that I'd like you to continue doing it for this session of Tech Talk.

Here is the link: Day off from school

You must read one of the essays that was given a 6 - they are both about snow days. Then you can read another essay or essays of your choice and comment on them. What do you notice about them? What kinds of leads do the authors use?

Most important this week, think about how you can use reading these examples to improve your own writing. What, if anything, will you do differently in your own personal narrative writing now that you have read these essays?

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